How do you expect echo to gain self-confidence about her works if you can't nag her about it because you didn't give the right example? I mean, saying this is garbage? I DISAGREE!!! hmfff.

Anyway, I personally prefer it like you wrote in the text... With "drown" written right... And echo's commenting that "mean" sounds a bit childish... Which is not exactly wrong I guess...

True true ^^ (i mean, 'bout the childish thing ^^ cause it's still garbage hehe)

Well, Lannan Shees kill you at the end, so...

the question mark, well, you can read something like "do i still have one?", something like that ^^

Hmm, that question mark looks kinda out of place to me...

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I'm sick of those misguided assumptions
And stifling presumptions,
Trying to model us into functions,
Expecting such and such reactions
Equating motions and emotions --
Artificial multiplications
Of expectations,
And less and less questions.

When excess of passion and compassion
Become factors of tension,
Increasing pressure leads to explosion
Of an infinite chain reaction.

...
Well, screw that!
Do what you will, it's spontaneity!

(In just a few months, I'll be free!)

.... Riiight....

Umm well I was at an expo ("savante banlieue") last thursday and friday with the 6emes and then the 3emes and there was one stand that was about poetry...

They had an activity where they gave a paper with sayings you had to complete... I'm copying down here:




So what can you put in there? I'll put up my answers after I get at least one completed reply. ^^

=P




Kinda repetitive... >< I'm in a rush.

I didn't like like at all what I did for 'Une femme pardonne tout ...'.
I didn't really like what I had for 'On peut aimer sans souffirir....' nor what I put for the last one.
And I put 2 words for 'On peut bien être ridicule...' where there should only be one, but well...
I was kinda rushed (had to keep an eye on the young ones and didn't find this stand 'fore Friday so didn't work on it between thursday and Friday) soo... I'm still unhappy with what I did for those four sentences.

Actually I was looking for something like what 'thisa put for 'Une femme pardonne tout..' but didn't find it... And I liked the last part of hers too, but the rest I like mine better I think. Although 'Dans un coeur troublé..' is different enough that I can't say which is really better.

To all the others, give it a try! I want to see what you make of it!

gomenasai, mais la phrase disait l'amour vit d'_______ et meurt de_____ et j'ai pas pu m'empecher de mettre d'ennui, je sais que ca brise la règle, pardonnez-moi, mais c'était trop tentant ^^

Si vraiment ça ne passe pas, alors je dirai,

L'amour vit d'ivresse et meurt de peur.


Voilà ^^

Je vais attendre que d'autres répondent peut-être avant de donner tout ce qui m'était passé en tête ^^

fun qu'on ait dit la même chose thisa chan! (je l'ai fait avant de lire vos trucs)

C'est pas grave j'ai mofifié certaines choses aussi ^^
Juste... "ennuie" ?! "metter" ? J'ai corrigé quelques fautes... (en fait juste ces deux là et une autre que je trouve plus - j'aurais pas dû corriger avant de poster...)

Sinon j'aime beaucoup, il y a vraiment un contraste à certains endroits ('La vie est une rose...' en particulier) avec ce qui a été fait avant...